I'm interested to see how the vocals would fit
I consider myself a pretty seasoned, creative musician and I cannot possible see any conceivable way vocals would fit over this and sound good, unless they are used sparingly. So, we'll see how it turns out. Honestly I think this song is intense enough to stand on its own. I voted 5/5 and 10/10, but really it is a 9.5 -- no song is ever a 10/10 :P
Listen to more Progressive Metal and you'll get plenty of ideas to put vocals on this.
Thankyou for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed the song :)
Okay, wow... So many mixed thoughts...
1) Way too many sounds effects. 2) That synth trumpet thing was a total WIN! 3) Song seems to sort of jump all over. Also, I can't really distinguish the vocals, but that isn't really a bad thing in this case. 4) Everything after 2:51 is completely bad-ass. The slight fusiony aspects really show off your potential as a guitarist and composer. Keep developing your style! 8/10 only because I think the first half of the song flows a little bit roughly.
Hey thanx man :) For the constructive criticism and the compliments means a lot to me :D Btw remember I work in a digital style and the guitars are computer :/ I play the lead on keyboard and program the rhythm. THANKEE FOR THE REVIEW
EVERY SONG SHOULD BE 6 MINUTES LONG!!!
Very enjoyable song -- definitely surpassed any of my expectations going into this as a techno song. Happy and dancey the whole way through while maintaining a unique quality. Keep it up!
Hey thanks for the feedback man. Im glad you like the song and it was not boring.
The music and effects on this are sick!
Please make more songs like this! I agree with the description, but I don't see how the vocal clips enhance this because I cant really understand what some of them are saying :P
I thought of it more as a hodge-podge of Americana ingredients that made up what this place is specifically. Even in its fragmented yet inconclusive forms. Thank you for your kinds words.
Has interesting little pieces
0:49 is sweet, and 2:15 is awesome... But most of the rest is very abstract and random in a mechanic and seemingly uncreative way. This is just my own perception. 2:51 to 3:46 only works because of the bass part. The intro and outro chords are fine, but the rhythm is very basic. Not meaning to hate on this song at all, just offer you some pointers. Some people want pointers, and I can't find any, and then other times people don't want pointers, and then they flow out of me. I hope you are not offended. At least you took the time and created something :P
Thanks man i appreciate it! dont forget to vote :D
It just sounds louder...
:D :D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D;D ;D
i added an instument in the background actually, giving the impression of a louder track. since this is for a tv intro, i wanted the theme to catch the viewers attention. naturally, if something appears loud, then it will command the viewers attention. adding another layer will hopefully do just that.
AHHHHHHHH!!!
Everything after the really distorted part is AMAZING!! AND SO EXTREMELY UNEXPECTED! Right when I was about to go back to the audio submissions page you blew my mind! Thank you so much! Very bizarre and quirky style!
thanx
The best part is 1:42 to the end...
Pretty interesting stuff. 1:42 is very reminiscent of Death. The rest sounds cool and I like that it is instrumental.
Thanks man. I love Chuck Shuldiner. I was influenced by him. So that's a big compliment.
Righteous!
I'm dancing weightlessly all around my house!
You must be on ambien too.
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