DENT-de-lion's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[TM3 - Why So Indulgent?]

It's easy on the ears...

And good for the soul! Gets slightly repetitive for my taste, but still a nice jam! Cheers!

[death becomes an angel]

Its very good for the first minute...

The violin part is beautiful, and I like how it fits with the beat, once it comes in. I'm not sold on the Rhodes piano type voice in the middle. My only complaint it that repetition could take the most beautiful song ever written and turn it into mind-numbing noise. You might consider writing a break down and having a violin solo, or at least changing either the violin part or the bass line/beat for a little while (it's four notes), then come back at the end. It just needs a little change and it will be great! Nice sounds!

[Nicoteen]

The first and last minute are great...

It's just in between those two points that more changes/build ups need to be happening... It just gets too repetitive! You might want to consider changing the drum beat entirely in that area, or changing a lot of the sounds/adding some type of melody, bass line, etc. People can only listen to the same drum beat for so long! I think that the end is the most creative/my favorite part. I like orchestra sections in electronic songs, and I like how it ties the beginning drum beat to the end... I just think the beat should take a scenic detour before it gets there! Cheers!

[TIGER M - Just You Rememb]

Song is pretty good, but has weird sounds...

First, I think cutting out the space between 0:48 and 1:00 might make a pretty big difference in its flow. Even though the intro is cool, I honestly lost interest at 0:48 until I skipped ahead farther. From then on, it flows pretty nicely until 3:36, where you unfortunately have a pretty weird sound... Maybe some people will like it, but it kind of takes away a big chunk of professionalism to me... So, take out those horrible noises and you're great! Cheers!

TigerM responds:

Thank You for listening in m8! =3
Stay remarkable and glad you enjoyed the track =)

F.I.L.,
-WAM! DJ, TIGER M! ^_~*

[DJ 64 - Haunted Keys]

All this song needs...

Is a really tight bass line! There is no bass!

[Communication]

Progresses too slowly to keep interest...

I think each section of this song stand alone, chopped up into one minute clips, might peak my interest... But adding a layer of clean, sharp drums over the rest of this track would definitely take it to the next level! Some of the rhythms sound pretty awesome (2:45), but don't build to anything without drums (in my opinion). Cheers!

[<pixel ambint>]

Anthem for droning robots...

With a two note bass line. Sorry... The drum part is just not a pleasing rhythm, and the whole song is just a little bit repetitive for me. I think if there were more things happening music wise, a drum part like that might fit. I think for the amount of composition here, the drum part should be very basic and understated so it doesn't clutter anything up. I gave this song an honest rating. I'm sure if you practice and EXPERIMENT a little more, you'll come out with something great! Cheers!

daisukeHiNgod responds:

All i can ask is honesty and your not the only one tha said that so yeah im practicing balancing my musics instruments :D
BTW im a way better animator than a music composer

[A sunny day!]

This should be under classical...

Good news! Starting at 3:12 this song gets pretty great! I just think that the beginning and everything leading up to 3:12 should be about half as long... And maybe the whole song in its entirety should be half as long. It has a pretty nice melody, but it seems to be a little repetitive... Not exactly my taste, but I can definitely see it suiting a lot of flash animations! Cheers!

DkayR responds:

Thank you for the comment, i really i appreciate your honesty!

[B1K - GlitchStep]

There are no rules.

I think the bass drum does sound appropriate, once the dubstep starts (which sounds pretty great, by the way). But as far as the intro, I don't think the drum set fits. You might want to change it to something more understated, and let the phased out leads bring you into the dubstep part. Then take off with the drums that are already there. All the squeals and glitches are great! Cheers!

zzbtbest1000zz responds:

Thanks for the feedback! This WAS one of my first dub songs, so I naturally didn't quite know what I was doing. I'm not sure If I saved this or even what version of FL I used to make this, so I can't really return to it.

But thanks again for the feedback :D

[Cassedonian Throw-Pillow]

I agree with J.

The song is composed very well, and the filter is used expertly. My only issue is that the build up to 0:51 gets compressed into the background... Otherwise, very catchy jam! Cheers!

zzbtbest1000zz responds:

Thanks. @ 0:51, yeah I couldn't get that to work for some reason :/

It's nice to see my work get compliments; glad you liked it