Very hopeful tune!
The intro doesn't do the rest of the song justice. Starting at 1:08 it gets good - until 2:07. A bird noise? Really? I like the part at 2:21. I love haunting sounds like that. Overall, the song could be half as long and be great. I like the chorus parts the best. I would work on the intro and all of the other parts that sound like that.
Yeah lol sorry about the long intro, back then I didn't completely understand song structure very well so I had that problem alot.
And as i stated in my comment the part at 2:21 is the ONLY part of the song that I like.
I am workin on a better version (without the bird noises lol), but I promise it will be wayyy better than this crap :p
Most of my old stuff isn't very good, like this song.
Anyways I do really appreciate your response and thoughts!
Not too bad...
The drums sound weird, the synth parts get annoying, but the guitars sound pretty sweet - which is really all that matters here! Keep it up!
Gets off to a great start!
As most of your songs do. Very peaceful! I love that chord at 0:53! 1:12 was interesting - I can hear a hint of Tool. I like 1:29, and I want to be able to get into 1:29 (I can feel myself almost headbanging), but I think the complete lack of bass and the tone of the guitars deters me... The tempo slowing down around 2 minutes into an ambient part is a good idea, but that part just wasn't epic or long enough for that to sound good (in my opinion). I would suggest putting a crazy breakdown or heavy part after 1:12 and before 1:29... I think it would flow much better - then continue on into the ambient part or fade out, etc.
Sounds great! Has a lot of potential!
I will see what I can do about the bass and that awful guitar as soon as I get my Line 6 UX1 running smoothly again... Thank you for the pointers. I will take them into consideration. I agree with the ambient part... I just have to figure out what I want exactly. Thanks again
This is great!
I really like how your voice sounds! You should do more work with vocals/choir.
Keep an eye out for my upcoming tribute to CAKE of their song Long Time. It's got some harmonization in it.
Its not bad.
But if this is a song, it is very short and unfulfilling... Nothing really changes or happens any differently than it started until the very end :(
Someone is attacked by a clown on an old VHS tape!
The sound quality was a bit FUNNY... I don't know if that is from your echo effect or what - just reminds me of someone being attacked by a clown! Sorry!
I still crack up reading the last post.
This was soooo good!
I just listened to it for about 5 minutes straight (reading the reviews) without realizing it was only a 25 second loop! :P Keep it up!
Glad you enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the review!
Wow!
I'm really impressed by this intro... It better lead into one hell of a song! Haha. Great chords, timing, dynamics, etc. Looking forward to hearing it finished!
Thanks a lot!
I'll make sure the rest of the song'll be up for par!
Cheers,
Samuel Hébert
Sounds pretty nice!
I feel like after the 30 second mark something should change... Although it works in this submission as a loop. I can't really say too much else, because it is so short... What is the Jazz Epic you're working on? Keep it up!
Thanks for the review!
This part was actually taken off of the project, being TOO pop for me and the general public's observation.
The Jazz Epic Project is a project I'm currently working on, planning to make a 10 minute song wich will include top notch jazz in the for of an Epic, a song depicting an adventure.
More news when I finish up the idea, it's actually never been done before.
Cheers,
Samuel Hébert
I like what you have here...
Although I can only stand the drum beat for 1 minute... After that it just hurts!
Hmm, that sucks for you. It's kind of like where you know veggies are good for you, but you don't like them, but since they're good for you you wish you did like them.
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