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DENT-de-lion

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I hope it breaks your dry spell, too!

Because you seem pretty talented (even though this is a really short loop :P)!

Sick!

Very clean and catchy melody!

Cool song!

That's awesome that your girlfriend writes music, and even more awesome (to me) that she sends you the MIDI files! That's sweet! You can't loose them and let that talent and connection you two have go to waste! :P As for the song, it sounds pretty good! My only suggestion would be beefing up the instrument voices AKA get some better ones! Hopefully she continues to send you songs! Keep it up!

Very nice!

Sounds like a very professional, classical remix. The tones and instruments go together very well! Great job!

TheBellmaker responds:

Thanks for the review

This does sound good

I see you are a big fan of tom-tom sounding percussion! My only suggestion would be maybe incorporate a real drum kit at some point (atleast maybe a high hat and snare), and also that the keyboard starts peaking around 0:50. Keep it up!

R3troGuy responds:

smoke weed every day

Wow!

This was actually pretty inspiring! I want to try making a song with weird machine gun type sounds now! :P

munkymania1974 responds:

thnx..this just kinda happened by accident

Pretty cool for your first try!

Keep it up! Has a dark sort of feel to it. I think it is funny how differently we approach rhythms using percussion. During one minute in I would have written a completely different part. I have to agree with Kira, I think either adding strings or a build-up with distorted guitar at one minute would sound awesome! Other than that, sounds pretty good! Keep practicing at guitar!

Good job!

This is so short the only advice I have is during the interlude spot (0:32 - 0:36), I would pair a crash cymbal/some sound with the last 2 bass notes (maybe the first/next bass note out of the transition also). It would make the transition out of it more solid. That's all I have. Keep it up!

I make electronic music. I also play drums and bass.

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