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Sounds pretty sweet!

Had me headbanging right away! The only part I didn't like was when the piano came in, I was a little confused... :P It doesn't really fit to me. Otherwise, a short but great track! 1:03 is awesome!

disk00 responds:

My style is a little weird I know. I don't really know why i threw piano in there..XD Like I said, im weird. Listen to any of my other tracks and you will know my style is ALL over the place it seems.

Yeah, sounds cool...

Except the for every single beat when it peaks! Master that shit -- then you're good! Great, even! The bass line is sick! The other weird keyboard thing after the bass line is sick! Good job, mastering would do this track wonders! Here is one suggestion, to add interest to the little interlude you have... Starting at 2:48 when the drums come in over the bass, you might want to try adding a double clap after the 2nd beat, every other time it loops. Like this: clap, clap-clap, clap, clap. Then again, clap, clap-clap, clap, clap. I would only do the double clap on the second time it loops, and then alternating every other time. If you are having a hard time understanding me, listen to the bass line starting at 2:34, and pay attention to where it peaks, it does the same thing. That's what gave me the idea. I hope you get what I mean. Other than that, you're golden!

Juresic responds:

Unfortunately, mastering this would be hard... as I have lost the FLP to this song. I found the MP3 on my computer and I was so happy I posted it xD!

I'd love to recreate this though.....

I just did.... I'm in the process of posting it as we speak...

Some of the notes sound a little off

There is so much going on here, though... It's fucking sick, man! -- Completely deranged! I like it a lot!

This is kind of cool...

But alternating between two chord progressions should last at most like 20 seconds -- if it is EXTREMELY catchy, maybe longer. This goes on for like a solid minute, and it is, no offense, not very catchy... Keep working on it, though!

Hell yeah, dude!

Make it longer!

Kind of awful...

The solo is bad... The rhythm is bad... I can't really find anything nice to say. The first few seconds were alright. Keep practicing!

hazi responds:

the thing is. that both guitars are me and i guess me sync is off. well at least i tried :)

Hell yeah, man!

It's about time this song was on here! :D

Pretty weird, man...

I like it, though! Good to see you post a new song!

RawGreen responds:

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Thankies!~

Add some strings! DEFINITELY!

Pretty good stuff. I like the tone the piano has. It gets a little bland though after a while. I'd fade in the strings around 30/40 seconds. Keep it up!

NordicHazard responds:

thx i'll work on it!

Keep it goinnnngggg!

Soooooo shooort!!

NaotoNekoCutie responds:

I'll see what I can do =)

I make electronic music. I also play drums and bass.

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